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Posted on 09-23-12, 02:12 pm
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Karma: 110 Posts: 274/981 Since: 02-11-12 Last post: 3488 days Last view: 3488 days |
Moved here so I could work with the sign up post without having to look at those terrible paint drawings...
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Citizen Jack de Frog |
Posted on 09-29-12, 04:36 am
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Karma: 100 Posts: 3/7 Since: 09-17-12 Last post: 4521 days Last view: 4482 days |
I found the characterization very complex and interesting but the plot became a bit muddled by the third act. I wouldn't change a thing though. Writing is impeccable, acting was great, incredible use of brush work and the phallic imagery really made me look at my life.
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fallenelf86 |
Posted on 09-29-12, 04:51 am
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![]() The HTML Wizard Karma: 100 Posts: 195/1317 Since: 03-03-12 Last post: 3571 days Last view: 2724 days |
Posted by Citizen Jack de Frog I found the characterization very complex and interesting but the plot became a bit muddled by the third act. I wouldn't change a thing though. Writing is impeccable, acting was great, incredible use of brush work and the phallic imagery really made me look at my life. 7/10 7/10? I was about to write this guy but come one. This is artt in prest form. |
MoeJoe |
Posted on 09-29-12, 08:47 am (rev. 1)
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Karma: 100 Posts: 4/48 Since: 09-21-12 Last post: 4131 days Last view: 3586 days |
+1 for glory
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Posted on 09-29-12, 11:18 am
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Karma: 110 Posts: 286/981 Since: 02-11-12 Last post: 3488 days Last view: 3488 days |
This is my entry. Think it totally blows away the competition!
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